Revised Narrative Essay 2/27

My Family by

Free Write 2-20-13

My job didn't last long. It wasn't worth the money it was costing between paying the babysitter and for gas. My paycheck was not even enough to cover that. I liked what i did on the job it just wasn't worth it so now i get to go find another job hopefully it wont be to hard.
So this weather coming today not looking forward to it. i hate bad weather. i wont drive if it gets to bad not even though i have four wheel drive.
I have the greatest husband i am glad he knows a lot about vehicles. He had to fix my Jeep it was leaking antifreeze. thankfullly all it was was a hose that needed replaced.
My baby girl is seven months old now its hard to believe she is growing up so fast. she had a doctors appointment yesterday and got shots poor baby didn't feel good the rest of the day. she weighs 20lbs. and 13 oz. and is 27 and a half in. long. she pulls herself up already. she is going to be walking before long.

My other children i wished they would loose their attitude. i dont now what has gotten in to them but i can't take it much more. i love them but something has got to give and i really hope it is their attitude.

Free Write 2/8/2013

I have started a new job so far I like it. I work for Intergrity Home Care. I enjoy helping others ecspecailly those that cant do everything theirself. You meat some of the seetest people. I help them clean their house, cook meals, bath, dress, and anything they need help with. I am glad that i was able to find a place to work that works with my schedule for school. The only thing i miss is not spending as much time with my children. my baby girl has been sick the last couple of days running a high fever but i dont now what is wrong with her she has no other signs of being sick. i thought she might have been teething but she has no signs of that being the case. i think i am going to have to take her to the doctor.

sensory language

See People Cars Television Stop sign Bicycle

Hear Cars Children Music Television Typing

Smell Food Trash Dirty diaper Puke Body odor

Taste Sweet  Sour  Spicy Salty Chocolate

Touch Children Steering wheel Clothes Soft Hard

I see a gentleman setting by the smelly trashcan, smelling of body body odor with dirt all over his clothes eating chocolate. The trash smelled like one of my daughter’s dirty diapers. He was enjoying the sweetness of the chocolate and nothing else seemed to bother him. A dark blue bicycle stopped at the bright red stop sign. You could smell the saltiness of the food cooking in the diner across the street. I go into the diner to eat and you could hear the short petite woman in the corner typing on the keyboard on her laptop. As I was getting into my red jeep grand Cherokee the black leather steering wheel felt sticky from the humidity.